This was the first story I wrote set in the
Pokémon world. It was about a Raichu, along with Ash and
most of the gang, but set a few years in the future.
I endeavoured to follow the style of the cartoon,
so some of the dialogue might be a bit simplistic. However, the
suspense builds up later on in, so it's worth persevering.
© Raichu (raichufan2001@yahoo.com.au) 2002
Goodbye, Raichu
Chapter One -- Ash
"Bye, Mom! I'm bored," announced Ash. "I'm going for a
walk."
"What about your chores, dear?" reminded Mrs Ketchum.
"I'll do them later," he replied, walking out the door.
Ash Ketchum was sixteen years old, sturdy, of average height,
with messy, thick black hair. He was on the handsome side of
ordinary, but that was for the girls to decide, if he ever got
around to noticing them. He spent most of his time catching and
training Pokémon.
Pokémon were creatures that, along with people,
inhabited the world. Most of them roamed wild, but they could
usually be caught and trained. Pokémon had amazing powers
and could be trained to fight matches. Every year Pokémon
League competitions were held around the world where
Pokémon trainers could send their Pokémon to battle
one another. Over the years, Ash had entered a number of
competitions and had done very well.
As Ash walked out the door, his favourite Pokémon,
Pikachu, ran after him, took a bound, and landed on the back of
Ash's head.
"Pika, pika!" he cried excitedly, eager to go for a walk with
his master. Pikachu was an electric mouse Pokémon, Ash's
first, which was given to him when he was ten years old. Ash and
Pikachu were inseperable, a perfect team, who knew each other so
intimately that Pikachu's limited vocabulary was hardly ever a
barrier to communication. They had fought so many battles
together and had so many adventures, that they couldn't even
recount them all. Ash couldn't conceive of what it would be like
without Pikachu by his side.
Ash strolled along the tree-lined street. After a minute or
two, Ash saw someone he knew.
"Hey, Gary! Do you want a Pokémon match?"
"Nah! I haven't got time," replied Gary, sounding completely
disinterested in Ash. "I'm going out with my girlfriend to see
the Pokéball Circus."
"What!? They've come to Pallet Town? Gary, everyone knows how
badly they treat their Pokémon."
"What do you know, Ash Ketchum," taunted Gary. "I'll have to
admit you're not such a loser after all when it comes to
Pokémon, but you're a real loser when it comes to girls."
Ash didn't bother replying. He thought to himself, "So that's
all he cares about--impressing his girlfriend. Why do I still
bother talking to that guy."
Ash and Gary seemed to get along when they were young, but
that was a long time ago now. Ever since Gary and Ash started
catching Pokémon, Gary showed himself to be conceited and
full of rivalry, putting Ash down at every opportunity. Ash's
temper was strained often enough with his jibes.
A while later, Ash noticed another familiar face.
"Hi Timmy, you're back!"
Tim, a short, dark-haired boy, was a relative newcomer to
Pallet Town. His family moved there about two years ago when
Tim's father got a job as an assistant to Professor Oak, a
world-renowned Pokémon researcher.
"Hi Ash. Call me Tim, won't you," Tim replied.
"I see your Meowth's evolved. How was your Pokémon
journey?"
A Meowth was a cat Pokémon who "adopted" Timmy when he
was still in preschool. When Tim turned ten, he and Meowth
started on their Pokémon journey to catch new
Pokémon and learn how to train them, just as Ash had done
six years earlier.
"Yeah, he evolved into Persian when we got our fourth badge.
Oh Ash, you should've been there!"
"Can I see your badges?"
"Sure," replied Tim, and showed Ash six shiny badges that he
won while battling in various Pokémon gyms around the
land. "I've just got two to go, and I can join the Pokémon
League, just like you did."
"Good luck!"
"Thanks. Hey, do you want to battle?"
"Sure," said Ash, who could never refuse a challenge.
"OK! How about my favourite Pokémon versus yours?"
"OK. Go Pikachu!"
"All right, Persian," called Tim to his own inseperable
companion. "Pounce."
Persian's sleek, swift body sprung into action. It leapt into
the air, and landed on the mark, slamming its small opponent
down. "Oh, no!" thought Ash to himself, who had a tendency to
rush into things. "I should've thought it was cat versus mouse."
Tim's voice broke Ash's thoughts.
"Persian, Scratch!" he called.
Ash collected his thoughts. "Pikachu, quick, Thunderbolt!"
Persian raised his paw, taking aim, getting ready to strike.
But Pikachu's body was already enveloped in a yellow glow, sparks
spitting out of his cheeks, priming himself for attack. Persian's
paw had scarcely moved, when, at lightning speed, a bolt of
electricity shot from Pikachu's body and shocked the feline,
mid-strike.
"Right, Pikachu, use Agility."
The cutest among Pokémon was also among the quickest,
and Pikachu sped towards Persian, then around him, and back the
other way, confusing his opponent. Persian found himself unable
to aim at such a speedy foe.
In the midst of the battle, Ash heard someone comment, "That
Pikachu's still pretty quick for its age."
Another voice spoke: "Ash is a good trainer. He keeps his
Pokémon fit and healthy."
That last voice was Professor Oak's. Ash realized that an
audience had gathered.
"Pikachu, Quick Attack!" cried Ash.
"Persian, retreat," ordered Tim. Persian obediently jumped
back, causing Pikachu to miss his mark. "Right, now that
Pikachu's tired out," continued Tim, "do another Pounce!"
Persian repeated his first attack, slammed the creature that
was less than a quarter his weight, leaving him stunned and close
to fainting.
"Pikachu, Thunderbolt!" called Ash, but Pikachu didn't respond.
"OK, Persian, do a Slash attack." Tim now definitely had the
upper hand.
Ash immediately realized that he had run out of time for an
electric attack. "Pikachu, block the attack with your tail!"
Persian's paw, nails extended, descended at such speed that
its motion was impossible to perceive. Instinctively, Pikachu's
tail arched over to protect his body, and...
"Eek!" The little creature gave a painful cry and then fell
silent.
"Wow, I've won!" yelled Tim jubilantly to the sound of
applause from the onlookers. "Ash, did I really beat you!?"
"You sure did," Ash replied. During his travels, Ash
eventually learnt how to lose graciously. He knew now that there
was no shame in losing when one did one's best. Ash received his
own badges from those better than him who had lost matches to him
in sportsmanship and fair play.
"Sorry, I don't have any badges to give you though," Ash
continued, and they both laughed at the joke.
"Your Persian's coming along real fine, Timmy," said Professor
Oak. "Better let it rest for a while," he advised.
"Sure," replied Tim, still elated.
"And I've been speaking to your father, Tim. You've been home
for two days and he's hardly seen you. Why don't you go and tell
him that I said he can have an early mark, and the two of you
spend some time together."
"Wow, thanks Professor! Bye Ash," said Tim as he rushed
towards Professor Oak's estate.
"I better get Pikachu home to rest too, Professor Oak," said
Ash. "Bye now."
"See you later, Ash."
Ash hurried off home carrying his Pokémon in his arms.
He noticed that his tail was hurt by that last attack, and didn't
want Professor Oak to notice. Of course, Professor Oak's
laboratory had better facilities than a home first aid cabinet,
but Ash was embarrassed to let the Professor see that he let his
Pokémon get hurt like that. Professor Oak entrusted
Pikachu to Ash in the first place, after all. The only other
place where sick or injured Pokémon could be treated was a
Pokémon Centre, but there weren't any in an out of the way
place like Pallet Town.
When Ash got home, his mother mentioned that Misty had phoned
while he was out, and asked if he could call back.
"Was it urgent, Mom? I've really got to fix Pikachu's
tail."
"No, I don't think -- oh my, the poor thing. Ash, how do those
poor creatures put up with all that fighting?"
It's OK, Mom. They don't usually get hurt like this. They
enjoy competing and trying to win. Don't you Pikachu."
"Pikachu," nodded Pikachu weakly in assent.
Misty was a friend of Ash's who had gone with him on many of
his journeys. Misty was a couple of years older than Ash, about
Ash's height, slim but strong, with a round, pretty face. She had
flowing red hair which she habitually tied in a lopsided
ponytail.
When they first met, Ash had borrowed Misty's bicycle to race
an injured Pikachu to a Pokémon Centre. However, Ash
ruined her bicycle in the process, and Misty started following
him to try and get him to pay her back. It wasn't long, though,
before they became close friends. Misty lived in Cerulean City,
where she was the Pokémon Gym leader.
Shortly after dinner, Misty rang again on the videophone. Ash
answered the call.
"Hi Misty, sory I didn't get back to you. I got sidetracked
with some chores."
"It's OK, Ash. I've got some news, and I'd like your help."
"What's up?" asked Ash.
"Well you know how two of my sisters got married and moved
away? Now Daisy's just had a job offer from the Viridian City
Gym."
"Wow! I heard that they're expanding to include gym leaders
for all the different Pokémon types."
"That's right," said Misty, "and they've offered Daisy the
water gym. The trouble is, I'll be left looking after Cerulean
all by myself. Don't forget we also do entertainment, so it's a
lot of work. But it pays enough to have someone else."
Ash's mom thought this sounded interesting enough to listen in.
"Hi Misty," she announced with her usual pleasant smile.
Videophone etiquette dictated that someone joining a conversation
introduce themselves with a greeting.
"Hi, Mrs Ketchum," replied Misty politely, "how are you?"
"I'm well thanks, Misty," answered Mrs Ketchum.
"Anyway, how can I help," asked Ash. "I don't know anyone who
wants to help in a gym."
"Well, that doesn't matter so much," said Misty. "I was
wondering if you'd like to do it," she announced. "At
least part time."
Ash was stunned. "You're offering me ... a job!?"
Mrs Ketchum thought she noticed a glisten in Misty's eyes, and
her voice had a restrained eagerness about it. She thought to
herself that Misty was doing a good job at hiding something. Mrs
Ketchum decided that she better not let her son mess up this
opportunity, as she knew he rarely had the forethought to think
about his future.
"That sounds like an interesting opportunity, Ash," she
commented.
"Me, a gym leader!" thought aloud. Memories raced through his
head: all the gym battles he lost, all those he won, and how wonderful
it felt to receive a badge. And then, he imagined how happy and proud
it would have made him if he could've really offered Tim a badge, and
teach him what he knew about Pokémon.
"Uh, sure Misty!" he finally said. "I'd love to do it."
"That's great, Ash. When do you think you can come over and we
can talk about it some more?"
"I suppose I can come tomorrow. Is that OK with you, Mom?"
"That's fine," answered his mother happily. "Goodnight, Misty."
"G'night, Misty," echoed Ash.
"Goodnight Ash, Mrs Ketchum."
Author's notes:
- Timmy and his Meowth appeared in The Purr-fect Hero.
- "Pounce" is not an attack that is authorized by the Pokémon
League. However, since it is used on the Persian Pokémon card,
I felt the liberty to use it in this story.
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