Heyaz--This isn't the original part 1 but we don't have the original. I hope this one is a little better. TY!
--Torchick
Chapter 1:Abandoned and Alone
She was too miserable. This star thing was NOT for her. She had changed herself completely.
Her looks, her attitude, her posse. Totally different. She didn't even recognize herself anymore.
She looked in the mirror. She saw her old self, tall and tomboyish, with short red hair
pulld into a side ponytail, a yellow halter and blue jean shorts with red suspenders and tennis
shoes. The image faded, the reflection changing to the girl she really was, in a long black gown,
long, wavy red hair and heels, perfect make-up, perfect everything. The old image replayed.
The smiling young girl was standing next to two boys. She smiled at that image. It faded again,
and her usual reflection stood before her, standing alone. Where did she go wrong? All she did
was become famous and the well-known girl she used to be, always with a group of friends who
always stood by her, now stood all alone. She started to cry. Where HAD she gone wrong? She
sobbed, realizing how awful her so-called "perfect" life was. She had everything and turned it
to nothing at all. She sobbed. "WHY? Misty Waterflower, what went wrong in your life?" she asked
herself.
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