Where Did I Go Wrong?
By: Rashad Scorpio
The Sequel for Through Mine
Eye will be here on about 3 months so you have to wait and bear with this story
here.
We all know the drill so I’ll
just give my little input.
Red text is Ash’s
thoughts
Pink text is
Green text is
Brock’s thoughts
Ages: Ash 13
Misty 14
Brock 18
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It’s a beautiful
morning in Pallet town. The sun is shining, the air is fresh and the birds are
singing. Everything seems to be perfect in this quiet town. Nothing could
possibly go wrong….
I spoke too soon
Ash: What is it now? Misty will you be quiet. It’s too early
and I need to sleep
Ash: Ow! What was
that for? I didn’t do anything
Misty: You know exactly what you did you little parasite!
You put honey in my shampoo bottle! Now my hair’s a mess thanks to you.
Ash: She’s cute when she’s mad
Brock now
up due to
Ash: Well think of
it this way, now you’re sweeter than you were before oops
did I just say that?
Ash now
notices Brock at the door with a face that says “you better cover this one up
fast”
Ash: Oh sorry hehe I guess I spaced out. Maybe
that will get here to leave me alone
Back to Ash and Brock
Ash: Is taking some aspirin My
head! Why does she have to start so early? starts drinking a
glass of water
Brock: Well you did
switch her honey with the shampoo. By the way I heard your little slip up. A big grin appears on his face Could it be that our
Ash has a thing for
Ash:: Spits water everywhere with a
red face No! There’s no way that I could ever like a monster like that!
Brock: Why are you
blushing then?
Ash: Busted Fine I love her ok!!! Love everything about her, the way she walks,
her sweet voice, how she looks like an angel when she’s sleeping :sigh: Gets a dreamy look while talking about
Brock: This kid’s got it bad. Well if you feel that way why
don’t you tell her.
Ash: Because
Brock: Running
away?! It’s that serious?
Ash nods
Brock: I didn’t know
it cut you that deep Ash. I don’t know what I would do if you ever ran away
from us. You need to tell her this before something bad happens.
Ash: I can’t
Brock: Why?
Ash: Because when I
look into her eyes I lose my cool and end up just staring into them.
Brock: crosses his arms laughing you got bad man! I feel
sorry for you.
Ash: Me! What about
you if I’m right I thought you were head-over-heels with
Brock: That name!!!! OK Enough of that! This kid need to realize
what’s wrong with him. At least I’m not afraid to show the one I love
how much I care!
Ash: ……….
Brock: Turns around Thought so Man
I’m good Walks to the door I suggest you
tell her how you feel soon Ash. I’d hate to see what would happen if you leave
us. More importantly, what would happen to
Ash: Easier said
than done. Forgets he has no mattress and fall
straight to the floor Waaa! Why me?