I didn't understand what he was on about - feathers? How on earth could a bunch of fluffy quills make a difference in a fight? Perhaps Jay was going mad… But then again, it was probably worth a try.
"Use peck attack to grab those feathers!" I ordered Pol, although I was uncertain if she even had the strength to jump, let alone perform a precision move.
Omela seemed to have predicted this choice of moves. As my first Pokémon struggled to force herself up on the front edges of her wings, it ran back and away, halting in front of its trainer's feet with a catch-me-if-you-can glint in its large black eyes. Although I bit my lip nervously, Polienix's normally naďve and happy face morphed into a mask of determination: she was going to pull off this move.
Hauling herself to her clawed feet, Polienix flapped her wings and threw herself forwards, beak snapping at the feathers held captive in Omela's maw. Like a fox, the other Pokémon dodged swiftly out of the way, dancing around Mel's legs before leaping over Pol as she dove forwards to attack. With a squawk the bird pivoted sharply, racing clumsily after her quarry with a combination of waddling and half-flight.
Beneath the huge "WANTED" was printed a copy of an old photo of me, taken when I had gone on holiday with my friends Samantha and Elliot. We'd gone down to Seasalt for one week of the summer holiday, but had managed to time it badly. It rained every day we stayed there and only stopped the night after we left. The photo had been taken when I was sitting on the edge of one of the cliffs guarding Seasalt's harbour, rain coming down in a style similar to the precipitation I was currently enduring. I remember Sam had come up behind me, telling me to stop being such a freakoid and come in from the rain. When I turned around I'd been blinded by the bright flash of her disposable camera, and the result was this very photo - the wind tossing my hair into wild turmoil as I glanced over my shoulder with a sceptical expression on my face. It had been a worthy holiday, but now its memory was helping the police trap me down. How lovely.
Now then Raven, if I've told you once, I've told you a million times… NEVER GIVE UP. Keep your eyes on your opponent, find that weak spot…
Taking quick inventory of myself, I found that I had just about enough strength left in me to pull off such a stunt. It might be a long shot — my head, chest and neck were already aching and my breath was coming in great gasps — but I might… maybe I could…
Focus, it's not hard.
Concentrate, Raven…ignore the pain, use your left fist or feet and take him out.
'Erm, how about not,' I nearly refused out loud, knowing full well that I was about as good as fighting with my left than Raijin was at admitting he was wrong.
Besides, the pain was making me nauseous.
Use the terrain!
Unthinkingly (which was fortunate, I wouldn't have considered such underhanded tactics normally as I wasn't really a street fighter as such), I snatched the silver metal lid from the bin I was leaning on and smashed it into the side of the other guy's head with all my might.
I crumpled.
Bloody trainer Nirvana! They were all on level one hundred!
I barely had time to see that the contents of my screen had changed once again, now displaying a list of four moves: fly, flamethrower, dragon claw and slash.
"Walrein, Aurora beam!" Karen ordered, stabbing at the air with one fist.
I panicked as the walrus Pokémon threw back its hairy white head.
"Fly!" I called to Salamance.
With a downward stroke of its sail-like crimson wings, my dragon launched its grey-blue form into the air and soared high into the simulated sky of the arena. The swirling greens and blues of Walrein's beam burst passed it, just missing Salamance's tail as the dragon let out a thunderous roar and plummeted like a stone towards its enemy.
"Blizzard!" came the order for a retaliation strike as Salamance smacked Walrein over with one massive shoulder.
To my dismay, the simulation didn't seem to need the sort of concentration Pol required to summon ice and snow. Sheets of white and blue tore through the air and battered Salamance's side, frost blossoms unfurling over its scaly holographic flesh as it bellowed and landed with a crash.
"Flamethrower!" I cried as it picked itself up, looking beaten.
Long white claws digging into the 'earth', the draconic creature lashed its long tail and threw forwards its head, releasing a roaring column of flame that leapt hungrily through the air to lick at Walrein's blubbery sides.
"Walrein!" Karen cried as her hologram got quite singed, "HYDRO PUMP!"
It was suddenly as though Salamance's attack wasn't wounding it — Walrein simply inflated its huge chest and let rip with a torrent of high-pressure water. The liquid barrelled into Salamance before I could call a counter-order, lifting the huge beast clear off the ground and hurling it into the base of my trainer's platform. Out of instinct I snatched hold of the railing and braced myself for impact, but no angry vibrations shook my dais. In the heat of the action I'd forgotten that these were holographic images, not real living creatures. I breathed a sigh of relief even though I'd just lost the round.
And I knew nothing I could say could help them.
First off, my sincerest apologies for the long wait, but you should be happy for it. If it weren't for that damn Writer's Block of mine, you would have just finished reading about twenty pages of unadulterated happy-happy slop. Yeah, I was originally planning an anime-style chapter involving Raven saving the smart, pretty and compassionate Karen, battling her in the Holodome and then spending her money on a new uniform. Luckily, by the end of my Block I had decided to go down the more angsty route and add Ray's father to the mix.
There were, as always, other reasons for the late update... namely my newer fic, Just a Girl, and the towering pile of coursework/tests/homework that seem intent on looming over me in a threatening fashion. To people who have yet to start their GCSE courses: Classical Civilizations is not the good option if you like your hand intact. What we've done so far is basically literary critique of Homer's Illiad and my Classivs-obsessed mind has forced me to fill page after page with my thoughts on hero's honour code and whether Achilles was an evil beast. The result is my writing hand developing some sort of permanent cramp and the rest of me gaining the odd habit of sitting up at ungodly hours in the night and scribbling notes about Hektor's morality onto my douvet. But I digress.
I tired to submit this update about three weeks ago so as to be able to wish you al a Merry Christmas in time, but it seems hotmail decided not to allow my submission to reach Jolt. Hence my original idea of accepting requests for artwork, one-shots and reviews as a Chrismas present has been shot down in flames. Technology is so often a bummer. Perhaps I'll open myself to requests for Easter or something odd like that, but who knows. I may as well leave my Christmas image in here... just for the heck of it.
On a final note, I'm currently preparing a ton of artwork to submit to Jolt as a replacement for all the terrible stuff that's currently present on my artist's page. If you're at all interested in that, keep your eyes peeled. Obsidian is currently obsessed with the "effects" you can get in Paint... and so has abandoned Photoshop for it. I'm nuts. ><