Hello everyone this is Davidpikachu here and i want commets on my story so please please send me a e-mail at
dacarlsen4@yahoo.com for those of you who want to know David's pokemon and age just e_mail me so ok heres the story
A special thanks o j*star cutie for giving me a good review thank you
Misty:14 Her pokemon (Starmie,Seaking,corsola,lapras,dewgong,togepi)
ASh:13 his pokemon (Pikachu,Blastose,Charizard,snorlax kingler,ivysaur)
Brock:16 His pokemon (graveler, onix,crobat,vulpix,) Readers note that i will probly not use all these pokemon in my story
David:??
Narr:we left you when pikachu was busy fighting but thats where we are not going to return................
Team Rocket:To protect the world from devastation
David walks right by team rocket while they are doing there motto since most of you know it im not going to finish it
Meoth: meoth thats right
James: alright big twerp hey where did he go
Jessie: you let them get away
James: no i didnt
Jessie: ohh forget it lets go did holes for the twerps when they arrive
james & meoth: ok jessie
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Narr: back at the battle
ASh:dodge the pin missle pikachu
Pikachu: pika pi (ok ash)
the pin missle misses
johnson: beedrill attack using poison sting
Ash: pikachu Agility
pikachu: pika pika pikachu (runnin runnin runnin)
the poison sting misses
Ash: pikachu go for a strong thunder
Pikachu turns his head and does that evil glare thats he sometimes does on t.v.
Pikachu: PIKACHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU (I LOVE THIS MOVEEEE)
BEEDRILL:beee dddrillllll beeee drilll (hellllp meeee hellp meeee)
beedrill falls to the ground very very charred.
Johnson: return beedrill
the beedrill returns to its pokeball
Johnson:here you go ash
hes throws the badge and it lands on ashs head typhlosion
ASh: where is my poison badge i want it
Johnson & misty & brock fall over when ash scratched his head he found it
Ash: oh here it is
they all fall over again
Pikachu: pika chu pika pi: (if i wasnt tired i would shock you)
you notice ash take a couple of steps away for pikachu
Ash & misty & brock: bye johnson
Johnson: bye kids
ASh: its still early lets go
Misty (speaking quietly with brock):brock i wonder how how long it will take for him to get us lost
pikachu falls of ashs head laughing about the joke (because he has good ears)
Misty and brock also have a case of giggles
Ash: whats so funny?
Brock: never mind ash
Ash & brock & misty: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
They fall into guess whos hole
Team Rocket: TO protect the world from devestation
Authors note: to keep from killing anyone out there i will go foward
Meoth: thats right
meoth with a rubber glove on a pole grabs pikachu and they got on the ballon.
T r: see you later twerps
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narr: we come to our friend David walking along the road with his friend typhlosion
David: well you wouldn't be sleepy if you hadnt eating all of our camp suplies
typhlosion: ty plo ty sion (anyway team dweeb is here)
james: we are team rocket not team dweeb
david: says who
James: well ahh ohh i know we are team rocket because we finally stole the twerps pikachu
holds out a cage with pikachu in it
David: ill take that
he just puts his hand out a plucks it out of his hands
James oh no jessie gonna be
jessie: be what mad because you lost pikahu
typhlosion: typhlosion (lets end this shall we)
Team rocket: uhh ohh
typhlosion: TYPHLOSION fire blast
Pikachu (now free) (: PIKACHU (thunder)
team rocket blast off again blink
David: well hello pikachu nice to see you again
Pikachu: pika pi (hello) sadly
david: well get you to ash dont worry
pikachu: pika pi (lets go)
David: does your group camp at night pikachu?
Pikachu: pikachu pika pi pka ( yes but ash gets us lost alot)
Ok people for davids second pokemon
David: ok pikachu go pigeot
davids: pidgeot is twice as big as a normal pidgeot hehe
DAvid: ok lets get you home
thank you everyone who reads this story please give me a rating my email is dacarlsen4@yahoo.com